How's My Running?

I realize a slice-of-life type game is an odd fit for a Shadowrun character. That's why I want to play with it! But it also means I'm likely to mess up. So please tell me how I'm doing. (Also my lingo is rusty as all hell so any help would be appreciated if I get something wrong)

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